1213: The Legend of Dragoon: The Eighth Spirit – Chapter Twenty-Eight, Part One

Title: The Legend of Dragoon: The Eighth Spirit
Author: PhoenixofShadows
Media: Video Game
Topic: Legend of Dragoon
Genre: Fantasy/Adventure
URL: The Legend of Dragoon: The Eighth Spirit
Critiqued by TacoMagic and Swenia

Urrggh.  This fic is just sitting on top of my head and squashing it.  And it keeps dragging things out by lobbing longer chapters like this one at me.

“I blame you for this whole fiasco.”

I do too.  Last time well… you know… Meru showed up…  I can’t even bring myself to type it.

“Meru showed up and the author all but broadcast that he really wants to bone her, so he set it up so that his insertion will do just that.  The rest of the chapter was largely inconsequential to watching the author shamelessly drool all over Meru.  She also makes her way into the character blob by showing them that they actually do need her help not only getting into the Valley of Corrupt Gravity, but also navigating it.”

This week, we join them on location back in Feltz, where they have to gain permission from the king to actually visit the Valley of Corrupt Gravity.  They need permission due to the king blocking access in order to protect it from fmarmalfrmmrls.

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