1970: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter Ten

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 10
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags) and Kane

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your guest host, BatJamags, and I’m back with more of The Shadow Warriors, the fic that I’m just about to take a break from!

The fic from which I’m just about to take a break!

There, that’s better. The point is, it’s chapter 10! Let’s get started with the (probably boring) author’s note!

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1964: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter Nine, Part Two

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 9
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your guest host, BatJamags, and I’m back with more of The Shadow Warriors, the fic that is down to its last quarter of a redemption cookie.

Last time, a new character named ? first-person narrated her way through some actually decent dialogue and characterization and a party involving Bruce Wayne and Edgelord. Then the Joker showed up.

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1956: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter Nine, Part One

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 9
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your guest host, BatJamags, and I’m back with more of The Shadow Warriors, the fic that just keeps finding new ways to suck. When I copy-and-paste new chapters into Word, I need to go back and fix a few formatting things to match my set-up, which involves at least skimming the chapter. So, believe me, this chapter introduces a completely new flavor of suck to this fic (well, new to this fic, anyway).

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1945: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter Eight

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 8
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your guest host, BatJamags, and I’m back with more of The Shadow Warriors, the train wreck of a fic that wants to be about Batman but also doesn’t like him for some reason.

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1936: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter Seven

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 7 
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m back with more of The Shadow Warriors, the fic that’s so edgy it’s a dodecagon.

I mean, just look at all that edge!

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1931: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter Six

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 6
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags and BadJamags)

Shadow Kill count: 5

Nicknames:

Edgelord: Shadow/Jayden Warney

Strawwoman: Breeze/Ally something-or-other

The Other Jason: Dusk/Jason whatever

Sam Motherfuckin’ Jackson: Gauntlet/Sam Jackson

Jean Grey: Phoenix/Blaze Zephyr

Comrade Communist: Red Crosshairs/Marcas Valitov

Weeaboo: Ronin/(Can’t be bothered to remember)

Iron Punisher: Thanatos/Thomas who-gives-a-shit

Agent 63: Hitgirl/Hillary Schank

Sovereign: Reaper/Flynn Anderson

Hello once again Patrons! I’m back to tackle a couple more chapters of The Shadow Warriors. And look who’s shown up to riff with me again!

BadJamags: How did you steal my non-nametag privileges?

Very quietly.

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1914: Padme-Series: Clone Trooper – Chapter Six

Title: Padme-Series: Clone Trooper
Author: Darth Sith’ari
Media: Film
Topic: Star Wars
Genre: None given, other than the fact that it’s an AU
URL: Chapter Six
Critiqued by BatJamags (BadJamags and Jamags)

Hello once again patrons! I’m your guest host, BatJamags, this is your guest guest host, Jamags-

Jamags: Hello.

-and we’re back with even more boring AU!

Jamags: Your tone indicates that I should be excited.

Are you?

Jamags: Guess.

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