1970: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter Ten

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 10
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags) and Kane

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your guest host, BatJamags, and I’m back with more of The Shadow Warriors, the fic that I’m just about to take a break from!

The fic from which I’m just about to take a break!

There, that’s better. The point is, it’s chapter 10! Let’s get started with the (probably boring) author’s note!

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1964: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter Nine, Part Two

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 9
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your guest host, BatJamags, and I’m back with more of The Shadow Warriors, the fic that is down to its last quarter of a redemption cookie.

Last time, a new character named ? first-person narrated her way through some actually decent dialogue and characterization and a party involving Bruce Wayne and Edgelord. Then the Joker showed up.

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1956: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter Nine, Part One

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 9
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your guest host, BatJamags, and I’m back with more of The Shadow Warriors, the fic that just keeps finding new ways to suck. When I copy-and-paste new chapters into Word, I need to go back and fix a few formatting things to match my set-up, which involves at least skimming the chapter. So, believe me, this chapter introduces a completely new flavor of suck to this fic (well, new to this fic, anyway).

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1945: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter Eight

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 8
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your guest host, BatJamags, and I’m back with more of The Shadow Warriors, the train wreck of a fic that wants to be about Batman but also doesn’t like him for some reason.

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1936: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter Seven

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 7 
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m back with more of The Shadow Warriors, the fic that’s so edgy it’s a dodecagon.

I mean, just look at all that edge!

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1931: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter Six

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 6
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags and BadJamags)

Shadow Kill count: 5

Nicknames:

Edgelord: Shadow/Jayden Warney

Strawwoman: Breeze/Ally something-or-other

The Other Jason: Dusk/Jason whatever

Sam Motherfuckin’ Jackson: Gauntlet/Sam Jackson

Jean Grey: Phoenix/Blaze Zephyr

Comrade Communist: Red Crosshairs/Marcas Valitov

Weeaboo: Ronin/(Can’t be bothered to remember)

Iron Punisher: Thanatos/Thomas who-gives-a-shit

Agent 63: Hitgirl/Hillary Schank

Sovereign: Reaper/Flynn Anderson

Hello once again Patrons! I’m back to tackle a couple more chapters of The Shadow Warriors. And look who’s shown up to riff with me again!

BadJamags: How did you steal my non-nametag privileges?

Very quietly.

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1928: Child of Imagation – Chapters Three and Four

Title: Child of Imagation
Author: ultimatewildcat
Media: Movies
Topic: Rise of the Guardians
Genre: Mystery and Sci-Fi
URL:  Chapter Three
Critiqued by Angie

Hey, everyone! Welcome back to Child of Imagation. My name is Angie, and here’s the recap.

Last time, we met a new guardian named Image who prefers to be called Emma. So Image is called to the North Pole where Pitch is teaming up with an old friend of hers, now going by the name of Nightmare. Pitch and Nightmare then travel to a city just south of east jesus nowhere, which happens to be Jack’s hometown. Two battles occur which, combined, last about as long as the original battle of the five armies. The climax hits about seven words into the passage when Pitch hits Jack with a plot hole and he disappears. And now you’re all caught up.

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