1221: The Legend of Dragoon: The Eighth Spirit – Chapter Twenty-Eight, Part Two

Title: The Legend of Dragoon: The Eighth Spirit
Author: PhoenixofShadows
Media: Video Game
Topic: Legend of Dragoon
Genre: Fantasy/Adventure
URL: The Legend of Dragoon: The Eighth Spirit
Critiqued by TacoMagic and Swenia

Six-and-a-half chapters.  Just six-point-five and we’re done.  We can do this.  Probably.

“And then I get my Wednesday back, right?”

Oh definitely.  For a while anyway.

“Ominous.  So last time the character blob lurched its way back to Feltz to meet with the king. After a protracted exchange with a gate gaurd, and then a quick run to grab the local governor to the princess, the group gets in for an audience with King Zior.  The king’s a bit muddled, which sets off Stanky’s jackass trigger sending him into full douchewarehouse mode.  Luckily, before Stanky can ruin the whole thing by being himself, he’s distracted by Meru long enough for Dart to secure the pass that will allow them into the Valley of Corrupt Gravity.  Then, despite how abominably he’s been treated by Stanky, the King still graciously invites them to stay the night in the palace, proving that he’s far more good intentioned than anyone in the blob.  And that’s where we left off.”

Let’s dig into the rest of this thing!

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