Title: The Girl
Topic: The Outsiders
URL: Chapter Six
Critiqued by Angie
Sponsored by the fact that someone could get offended by Soc and Greaser™.
As I am sitting on my couch reviewing two fics at once, working on Brego’s Mistress part four, I am constantly reminded that eventually I can take a break from reviewing the terrible Lord of the Rings fic and go towards the slightly less terrible Girl.
THAT SURE AIN’T SAYING MUCH THOUGH HUH.
Anyway, this chapter is “luckily” twice as long as the former, which…at least it gives me more to say. So without further ado, let’s see from whose perspective this chapter is told.