1725: Love & Bullets – Chapter Seven, Part One

Title: Love & Bullets
Author: MissScorp
Media: Comics
Topic: Batman
Genre: Drama/Romance
URL: Chapter 7
Critiqued by BatJamags (BadJamags and GoodJamags)

What do you need us for? count: 10

Dick is a dick count: 5

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your guest host, BadJamags…

GoodJamags: … And I’m your guest guest host, GoodJamags…

… And we’re back for more of Love & Bullets, the fic which seems rather lacking in love and entirely lacking in bullets.

GoodJamags: There seriously has not been a single bullet since we’ve started this thing. Look!

Bullet count: 0

Anyway, we start out with the usual canned author’s note and-

GoodJamags: Line break!

To get to the start of the chapter.

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