Title: Love & Bullets
URL: Chapter 7
Critiqued by BatJamags (BadJamags and GoodJamags)
What do you need us for? count: 10
Dick is a dick count: 5
Hello once again, patrons! I’m your guest host, BadJamags…
GoodJamags: … And I’m your guest guest host, GoodJamags…
… And we’re back for more of Love & Bullets, the fic which seems rather lacking in love and entirely lacking in bullets.
GoodJamags: There seriously has not been a single bullet since we’ve started this thing. Look!
Bullet count: 0
Anyway, we start out with the usual canned author’s note and-
GoodJamags: Line break!
To get to the start of the chapter.