1667: Heroes and Villains – Chapter Fourteen, Part One

Title: Heroes and Villains
Author: Horrible’s Igor
Media: Television / Movies
Topic: Buffy: The Vampire Slayer / Kitchen Sink
Genre: Supernatural/Drama
URL: Heroes and Villains (Now Defunct)
Critiqued by TacoMagic and Eliza

Hey folks, welcome back!  Let’s just jump right into the recap.

Last time we started off with a random conversation between Mr. Guyman and GirlWoman who appear to have started a relationship.  They gab about GuyMan’s project a bit and going to the French part of France afterward, then the scene ends.  Next up, Buffy is in the hospital with Jim when Willow jumps out of the SDQF and takes her money from them, rendering a large part of both chapters thirteen and fourteen pointless.  Well, more pointless.  Then Willow takes off and Olaf jumps out the SDQF. They all talk about magic and faerie tales a bit then the scene peters out.  Meanwhile, Willow pays Bad Horse all his various crap and he hands over Dr. Horrible.  There’s some Wikipedia regurgitation after that, but otherwise that’s everything.

“Unfortunately this week is the start of another very long chapter.”

I’m pretty sure this is the longest one in the fic.  Definitely the longest of the remaining chapters.  Also unfortunate is that the set of heists has just ended, so instead of anything new happening, I’m pretty sure we’re about to get ten-thousand words of reaction to Dr. Horrible’s transfer, possibly more since there are still seven more chapters after this one.  I have a feeling I’m going to need to cut a lot of stuff to get through this.

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