1378: Legaia Nara and the SimSeru – Chapter Five

Title: Legaia Nara and the SimSeru
Author: Vick330
Media: Video Game
Topic: Legend of Legaia
Genre: Adventure
URL: Legaia Nara and the SimSeru
Critiqued by TacoMagic

We’re finally here, people!  The last chapter of this little fic duo.  This chapter is actually really short, so we’ll be getting out of class a little early today.  To be honest, this week is a busy one for me, so I decided to do this chapter as it’s own thing rather than do it last week so that I can attend more pressing matters.

So last time?  Well, last time the author basically erased everything that managed to happen in the last two fics so that he could come full circle.  We once again have a babby Cort in the care of Noa.  True, now she’s got other kids and is married to Vahn, but it’s not impossible to have arrived at a similar position without all the trajek-happenings of the first fic or the profound stupidity of this one.  So I really don’t need much of a recap here; the status quo has been reinstated.  Though there was a poorly described battle or something last chapter where nobody was hurt.  I think.  It could also have been poorly described tentacle porn, the fic wasn’t very clear at the time.

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