759: United under two skies – Chapter Eleven

Posted: June 29, 2014 | Author: | Filed under: Fallout, Mass Effect, Uncategorized, United under two skies, United under two skies | Tags: , , , | 45 Comments

Title: United under two skies
Author: Gearman
Media:  Video Game
Topic:  Mass Effect/Fallout
Genre: None Listed
URL:   Chapter Eleven
Critiqued by SuperFeatherYoshi

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*Due to the extreme amount of what-the-fuckery Chapter 10 contains, this section has been redacted for security reasons. We apologize for any inconvenience, please see Chapter 10 snarking for more details.*

Hey guys, SuperFeatherYoshi here! And I’m glad to inform you all that since my mid-term exams are finished, I can finally concentrate on snarking!

Honestly, I can’t believe Gearman was capable of cramming so much Whiskey Tango Foxtrot inducing content into a single chapter. And literally EVERY SINGLE ONE OF THEM was a giant middle finger to Mass Effect canon.

Can Gearman sink lower? Can Rex become even more unlikable? Will there be any tension left in this story? Let’s find out, shall we?

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