739: My Immortal – Chapter Thirty-Two and Thirty-Three

Title: My Immortal
Author: Tara (reposted by the lovely internet trolls)
Media: Book / Movie
Topic:  Harry Potter
Genre: Romance / angst
URL:  My Immortal – Chapter 32 and 33
Critiqued by Lyle

Hello, everyone!  Welcome to Chapters 32 and 33 of My Immortal.  Let’s recap!

Last time, Ebony, Draco, and Harry had to endure Snape dancing around with his pants around his ankles.  He tried to make Ebony stab her friends but she took out her cellphone and text for help.  Sirius showed up, rescued them, and Ebony ran off with Professor Sinister instead of being sent to the school’s infirmary to be checked out for injury.  Tara completely confuses what the hell a pensieve is for and has Ebony jump into one in order for her to meet young Voldemort, instead of using the Time Turner that Sinister gave her.  She somehow ended up in Middle Earth, though, as the first person she saw was Tom Bombadil. That’s about it.  Shall we get on with the torture?

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