1019: Tangled: alternative story – Chapter One

Title: Tangled: alternative story
Author: BionicDragonSpirit
Media: Movie
Topic: Tangled
Genre: Romance / Humor
URL: Chapter One
Critiqued by Lyle

Hello everyone!  I’ve got spectacular news!

*holds up a cattle prod*

I found Carlos!

*BZZZZZZT!*

And he’s super excited to be back, as you can tell.  *tucks the cattle prod through her belt*

Now to today’s riff.  I’ve found a new multi-chapter fic to take apart.  This one is called “Tangled: alternative story,” written by BionicDragonSpirit.  The title caught my attention due to the fail to capitalize words.

For those unfamiliar with Tangled, it’s the Disney remake of the fable “Rapunzel.”  I, personally, like it more than “Frozen.”  Pretty much what happens is an evil witch named Gothel kidnaps Rapunzel for her magic hair after the queen consumes a potion while pregnant that was made from a magical flower that kept Gothel young for hundreds of years.  A rogue named Flynn (real name Eugene) finds Rapunzel by accident and promises to take her out of her tower to see some floating lanterns.  Goofy hijinks and Disney love happen, evil is defeated, and she gets reunited with her parents in a happily-ever-after sort of way.

That’s not what this story is about though.

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