1254: The Final Hunt – Chapters 14, 15 & 16

Title: The Final Hunt
Author: Uhjinhyuk55
Media: Video Game/Anime
Topic: Bloodborne/RWBY
Genre: Drama/Adventure
URL:  Chapter 14, 15 & 16
Critiqued by Erttheking

Ert: Oh crap, THIS AGAIN!?

Seiko: *Shrugs* We couldn’t find anything else in time. There’s more than enough material here to get us through the week.

Shepard: Mind giving us a recap Ert?

Ert: Fine. A twat that calls himself Crow got sucked into the world of RWBY from Bloodborne. The portal was one of those physical alteration ones and the wheel hit on “age” and he was turned into a teenager so he could be a student at Vale Academy. This turned out to be pointless after he became a teacher in a couple of months and the author showed he didn’t know how lesson plans work in school as he started his plans in the middle of the school year. The Vilebloods from Bloodborne are doing something but it’s so vague they might as well be running around saying, “Oggie boogie,” for all the good it does them. And Crow refuses to have social interaction whenever possible and keeps secrets from everyone because he’s a twat. Also, in general the world of RWBY has been getting the shaft to build up how awesome Bloodborne is

The coffin was filled with darkness to the brawler’s eyes, it was calling out to her.

Shepard: Just to make sure I’m reading that correctly, it’s dark to her eyes only?

Ert: There’s potential in an area that’s only dark to some people, but I doubt this story meant to do that.

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