928: Life with Raptors – Chapter Six

Posted: January 7, 2015 | Author: | Filed under: Jurassic Park, Life with Raptors | Tags: , , , , , | 86 Comments

Title: Life with Raptors
Author:   AwesomeHunter77
Media: Movie
Topic: Jurassic Park
Genre:  Humor/Drama
URL: Life with Raptors
Critiqued by TacoMagic and Eliza

Salutations, dearest patrons!  Since I lost the bet with Taco last week, this week I’ll be flying alone.  We will see what kind of dept of pies he earns for this little stunt.

Hmm, recap.  Well, last week’s chapter was all about sex.  Sex. Sex. Sex.  It should have been anyway.  All that really happened was May taking a waterfall shower, her and Sorin stumbling upon two of the generic raptors in flagrante delicto, and wandering off to go swimming and star gazing.  The chapter ended with Seth’s and May’s personalities doing a U-turn, assuring a more close match to Rae and Sorin.  And that was pretty much it.  The other 95% of the chapter was word padding.

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