Title: Twin Humanities
Media: Video Game
Topic: Dark Souls
Genre: Adventure Romance
URL: Chapter 28.5
Critiqued by Erttheking
N: All right Ert! The bogey is slippery but we’re closing in on it! It’s trying to lose us in the asteroid belt around the station, but we’ll get it.
E: Why the Hell did you build this near an asteroid belt?
G: Liked the view. Anyway, whoever stole the ring is in for a surprise.
C: Huh. Turns out asteroid belts are actually really spaced out.
G: Yup, movies get it all wrong.
E: Look, I can handle the red ring, and Cornelia can just get it off me if I’m wrong. I can go out there and help them-
G: Not to rain on your parade, but it’s 3v1 our advantage out there. They really don’t need your help. Now don’t you have a review to do?
E: Ugh, fine. Read the rest of this entry »