2545: Kirby: Welcome to Smash Bros – Chapter Eleven

Title: Kirby: Welcome to Smash Bros
Author: Quartz2006
Media: Video Game
Topic: Super Smash Bros.
Genre: Romance
URL: Chapter 11
Critiqued by Elysium16 and Rimura

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Null and Void: 19

Elysium: Welcome back, patrons!

Last time, Kirby threw a tantrum, got comforted, blah blah blah, super boring. This time! …more boring. Also, Captain Falcon! Who is also boring. Sigh.

Chapter 11: Luggage Take Out

Elysium: “We’ve got ‘im in our sights! Take the shot!”

After a while, I decided to draw a picture of me and Jigglypuff with crayons. I am starting to like her character,

Rimura: I, meanwhile, am somewhere between ambivalent and dislike.

she isn’t like the rest of the Smashers

Rimura: You’ve barely known them for a—

(well, we just know each other about an hour ago).

Rimura: …oh.

Elysium: No, Quartz, riffing you is our job! Stop being self-aware!

…actually, do be self-aware. It’d be entertaining, at least.

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