Title: Kirby: Welcome to Smash Bros
Media: Video Game
Topic: Super Smash Bros.
URL: Chapter 11
Critiqued by Elysium16 and Rimura
Null and Void: 19
Elysium: Welcome back, patrons!
Last time, Kirby threw a tantrum, got comforted, blah blah blah, super boring. This time! …more boring. Also, Captain Falcon! Who is also boring. Sigh.
Chapter 11: Luggage Take Out
Elysium: “We’ve got ‘im in our sights! Take the shot!”
After a while, I decided to draw a picture of me and Jigglypuff with crayons. I am starting to like her character,
Rimura: I, meanwhile, am somewhere between ambivalent and dislike.
she isn’t like the rest of the Smashers
Rimura: You’ve barely known them for a—
(well, we just know each other about an hour ago).
Elysium: No, Quartz, riffing you is our job! Stop being self-aware!
…actually, do be self-aware. It’d be entertaining, at least.