2548: Legendary Dungeons, Futuristic Dragons – Chapters 7 and 8

Title: D&D Tag Along
Author: Tint
Media: Tabletop RPG
Topic: Dungeons & Dragons
Genre: Adventure / Fantasy
URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2159233/7/D-D-Tag-Along
Critiqued by BatJamags and Kane

Hello once again, patrons. I’m your guest host, BatJamags, and I’m back with another chapter of D&D Tag Along. Or DD Tag-Along, as the author has apparently taken to calling it.

DD Tag Along

See?

Chapter 7: War Tactics

Kane: The word “war” strikes me as an unnecessary clarification.

A/N: A couple of interesting points have been raised. Now that I think about it, Tint (the character) suddenly appears to be useless.

“Suddenly?”

“Appears?”

He’s only killed two creatures before and has yet to show any extraordinary abilities. Here he is, thrust into the middle of an all out war of unexplainable importance. I’ll have to think of something that will set him above any other ordinary fighter.

I have a hunch that this paragraph is what causes this fic’s rapid spiral into insanity in the last few chapters.

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