1410: Tensei II – Chapter One
Posted: May 9, 2016 Filed under: Naruto, Tensei II | Tags: Adventure, Anime, Frienship, Lyle, Manga, Naruto, Self Insert 64 CommentsTitle: Tensei II
Author: The KittyCorn Nation (two author-conglomerate known as Monochrome Lynx and Seven Silver)
Media: Anime/Manga
Topic: Naruto
Genre: Adventure / Friendship
URL: Chapter OneCritiqued by Lyle
Good morning, everyone! Welcome back to “Tensei II.” Let’s recap!
The first chapter, which was really a prologue, was dumber than calling French Fries “Freedom Fries” because you’re mad at the French for not wanting to get involved in a war. Self Insert Alice and Self Insert Erectile Dysfunction were on an airplane when the wing exploded for [reasons]. Alice died when the glass windows that don’t exist in airplanes exploded and impaled her. Then Earwig died when the rest of the airplane exploded for more [reasons]. None of this was a surprise, nor was it in any way suspenseful, though, because we were told in the story summary and in a pointless copy-pasta of the summary within the story before the story actually started that both of them were going to die on the airplane.
Seriously, I could not make this sound stupider if I tried.
With that, let’s get to the actual chapter one!
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