995: The Legend of Dragoon: The Eighth Spirit – Chapter Three

Title: The Legend of Dragoon: The Eighth Spirit
Author: PhoenixofShadows
Media: Video Game
Topic: Legend of Dragoon
Genre: Fantasy/Adventure
URL: The Legend of Dragoon: The Eighth Spirit
Critiqued by TacoMagic

Hello, patrons!  Now that the illness has passed, I’m feeling well and chipper enough to tackle chapter three of this crapfest.

Well, I was feeling well and chipper, anyway.

Last time we had a short chapter that really was only there to inform everyone that this fic’s author insertion, Style, was joining Dart on his revengination world tour.  Yes, that’s a word.  Other than that, it was mostly just plot regurgitation.

But, after two pretty short and regurgitive chapters, this week we finally get to sink our teeth into the meat of this fic.  In chapter three, we get a chapter that will set the mood for the rest of the fic to come.  This chapter is:

Chapter III: A Besieged Seles

I’m just a quiver with anticipation!  So, we’re thrown in media res into the life and death struggle of the people of Seles as their village is burned around them and their fellow townsfolk murdered by Freugel’s forces-

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