1145: Hammer Effect – Chapter One

Title: Hammer Effect
Author: Kamzil118
Media: Video Games
Topic: Warhammer 40,000 (40k)/ Mass Effect
Genre: Adventure/Sci-fi
URL:  Chapter 1
Critiqued by Erttheking.  Who still needs a freaking drink

Nora: Oh God, more Warhammer? Please tell me it’s not something EP wrote.

Ert: Don’t worry, it’s problem lies more in lore defilement than…anything EP did. It’s a falling action compared to that.

Goeth: All righty then, what do we got here?

Ert: A crossover with Mass Effect, because crossovers are minefields for bad fan fiction writing sadly. And this one is no exception.

Author’s Note: I made drastic changes to the story, so expect a character to be switched out and I’ll start with the background of General Siegfried in this chapter.

Ert: Yes, yes, yes, because no one has ever used Siegfried as a badass sounding name before.

Disclaimer: I do not own Warhammer and Mass Effect.

First Contact

He felt the shaking of shells come at his men,

Nora: So what’s a shaking of shells and what does it want with your men?

his general had been killed when a heretical valkyrie had gunned down his Chimera. He struck the banner of Krieg into the ground,

Ert:…Krieg? Oh dear. In the Imperium of man, while the Space Marines are its most famous fighters, the Imperium actually has more planets than it does Space Marines (Originally. With how grim dark things have gotten that might not be true anymore). The majority of the fighting falls to the PDFs and Imperial Guard, ordinary men and women with flak jackets and lasguns which, while effective, look under powered compare to the shit most other species field. The thing that makes them interesting (Besides the whole ordinary men and women standing up to the horrors of the galaxy and beating it down thing) is that Imperial Guard regiments are formed on separate planets and tend to have their own theme.

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