1091: Tangled: alternative story – Chapters Eight, Nine, and Ten

Posted: June 29, 2015 | Author: | Filed under: Tangled, Tangled alternative story | Tags: , , , , , | 22 Comments

Title: Tangled: alternative story
Author: BionicDragonSpirit
Media: Movie
Topic: Tangled
Genre: Romance / Humor
URL: Chapter eight
Critiqued by Lyle

Good morning, everyone!  Welcome back to “Tangled: alternative story.”  Last time we read through this, we discovered that the Kingdom of Corona has running water and electricity, but there was some confusion if pushups had been invented yet.  We experienced some stale romance and our protagonists snuggled.  That’s about it.

This week I’ll be going it alone.  Koori received word that her family’s new home has been built and she went back to help her dads and brother decorate.  She’ll be back next week, most likely.

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