536: If You Don’t Have Something Nice to say – Chapter Eight Part 2 and Chapter Nine

Title: If You Don’t Have Something Nice to say
Author: onlykafei
Media: Video Game
Topic: Fire Emblem (Path of Radiance/Radiant Dawn Duology)
Genre: Romance/Angst
URL: If You Don’t Have Something Nice to say: Chapter 8
URL: If You Don’t Have Something Nice to say: Chapter 9
Critiqued by Herr Wozzeck

WARNING: The entire rest of this fanfic contains various scenes of emotional abuse and sexual harassment. Because of the way these subjects are treated by this fic, people who are sensitive to such subjects may wish to skip the rest of this riff.

*sits back in the chair in a huff*

You know, I almost ended this whole snarking last week. I just… what can you really say about a fic once you’ve seen it romanticize sexual harassment to the degree that onlykafei does here? It’s just so hard to come up with things to say after that point, it really kind of is!

But damn it, if I was able to get through The Prayer Warriors, I can get through this. At least this fic has a plot and actual characters, even if the characters have about the same personality as a sheet of horribly colored printer paper. So you know what? I can do this.

Let’s get started, shall we?

*pulls the gloves back on*

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