Posted: August 15, 2014 | Author: GhostCat | Filed under: Avatar, Harry Potter, The rare Animagus: REWRITTEN VERSION!, The rare Animagus: REWRITTEN VERSION! | Tags: Avatar, Book, Ghostcat, Harry Potter, Movie, Romance, Spiritual, The rare Animagus: REWRITTEN VERSION! |
Title: The rare Animagus: REWRITTEN VERSION!
Author: Bijuui9/RavenNoKitsune
Media: Book / Movie
Topic: Harry Potter / Avatar
Genre: Romance / Spiritual
URL: Chapter 4
Critiqued by Ghostcat
Gracious greetings, fabulous Patrons!
I’m here with the (thus far) final chapter of rare Animagus. Let’s get the recap out of the way … :flips through notes:
Wow, the last chapter was really short. All I’ve got written down is “After getting licked by the Toruk, Harrysaurus bathes while a Na’vi watches in secret before confronting him”. That can’t be the only thing that happened last time.
:checks fic:
Well, it looks like Jake Sully arrived on Pandora and Harrysaurus was able to intuit his entire purpose in life with one glance, but that Peeping Na’vi thing is what sticks in my mind. Go figure.
On to the fic!
Staying low to the ground Harry moved silently to the open area.
Or as we like to call it in the Library, the Formless Void. At least there hasn’t been another time-skip.
Jake Sully really got him self in an amusing predicament.
Wait, what? How did the narration move from Harrysaurus to Jake within the same paragraph? And didn’t Jake just arrive on Pandora? What could he have done that Harry saurus would find amusing?
He was currently being chased by a Thanator.
Oh, right; during his first trip out in the Avatar, Jake wanders off like a toddler in a toy store and ends up getting attacked by a giant predator.
The idiot managed to anger the animal, causing said animal to attack him.
I know, I just said that.
Looks like we’re in for some plot regurgitation, Patrons!
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Posted: August 1, 2014 | Author: GhostCat | Filed under: Avatar, Harry Potter, The rare Animagus: REWRITTEN VERSION!, The rare Animagus: REWRITTEN VERSION! | Tags: Avatar, Book, Ghostcat, Harry Potter, Movie, Romance, Spiritual, The rare Animagus: REWRITTEN VERSION! |
Title: The rare Animagus: REWRITTEN VERSION!
Author: Bijuui9/RavenNoKitsune
Media: Book / Movie
Topic: Harry Potter / Avatar
Genre: Romance / Spiritual
URL: Chapter 2
Critiqued by Ghostcat
Greetings, noble Patrons! I’m back with another chapter of HP/Avatar crossover weirdness.
The last chapter was dense with exposition, much of it very offensive and serving only to isolate the Stu and reinforce his specialness, but by then end of the mess an immortal Harry Stu, last of the wizards, was on Pandora communing with Eywa. Because reasons.
On to the next chapter!
It’s really was amazing what five years on Pandora could teach a person.
And there’s a time skip right off the bat. Lovely.
Knowing his magic as much as he does now is truly amazing for a wizard.
Did you timeskip over some spectacular training montage? He was this super-duper strong wizard even before he became the last one. How did he manage to get even better?
Oh, right – he’s a Stu. These things just … happen.
There had never been a wizard with ability’s such as the ones Harry had and now he was the first, last and only one to have such control over magic.
:covers eyes:
Barely through the first paragraph and already the Stu-stroking is bordering on pornographic.
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Posted: July 25, 2014 | Author: GhostCat | Filed under: Avatar, Harry Potter, The rare Animagus: REWRITTEN VERSION!, The rare Animagus: REWRITTEN VERSION! | Tags: Avatar, Book, Ghostcat, Harry Potter, Movie, Romance, Spiritual, The rare Animagus: REWRITTEN VERSION! |
Title: The rare Animagus: REWRITTEN VERSION!
Author: Bijuui9/RavenNoKitsune
Media: Book / Movie
Topic: Harry Potter / Avatar
Genre: Romance / Spiritual
URL: Chapter 1/Prologue
Critiqued by Ghostcat
— WARNING—
THIS FIC CONTAINS MULTIPLE REFERENCES
TO CRIMES AGAINST HUMANITY
[I’m sorry, Patrons, but this one sort of bit me in the ass about a third of the way through. It is horrible, and I apologize in advance. – Ghostie]
Salutations, effervescent Patrons!
I’m here with another fic from my pile. This one is fairly new to the stack, and (like last week’s) comes from an author I’ve featured before. It’s yet another Harry Potter crossover fic – this time, the canon is crossed with Avatar!
:whispering:
No, Shinobi-san, not the good one – it’s the crappy one with the blue cat-people.
So which of my previous authors wrote this little gem? No cheating by checking the header!
Let’s see if you can tell based on the fic summary.
Harry,after fighting 2wars &multiple battles and seeing the magical world get destroyed, decides to leave earth and goes to ere he starts a new life,but will he be able to put his past aside and live that new live? Disclaim:I Don’t own ed to be on my old account RavenNoKitsune, now posted here
An asskicking version of Harry decides to leave Earth and start a new life, plus the title has the word Animagus in it? This can only be the work of Bijuui9, who penned the infamous Animagus Predator.
:ducks behind desk to avoid garbage thrown by Patrons:
It’s from a previous account she had, RavenNoKitsune, and it’s slightly older than Animagus Predator; it has some of the same plot elements, so it’s sort of like the beta version of that fic. Only so much worse.
:a brick slams into the wall beside Ghostie:
Hey!
As you can tell from the title, this is supposedly the “rewritten version” but just skimming through the old version I can’t really see any changes- there are a few Author’s Notes explaining that the fic is going to be moved but that’s about it. The bulk was just copy-pasted from one source to the other with only the username changing.
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