807: Subject 23 – Chapter 3 & 4

Title: Subject 23
Author: The Eezoman
Media: Videogame
Topic: Mass Effect
Genre: Adventure/Romance
URL: Chapter 3 & Chapter 4
Critiqued by Erttheking

WARNING! THIS CHAPTER TRIVIALIZES FEMALE ON MALE AND MALE ON MALE RAPE! PLEASE PROCEED WITH CAUTION!

E: So, things aren’t working out with Stupard?

W: It looks like this isn’t going to be as easy as it was with Seiko. She was a blank slate, there wasn’t anything to overwrite. This guy has been raised from birth to have it reinforced into his head that he’s hot shit.

N: Look Ert, Seiko is talking to him right now, but we may need to accept that this guy is beyond redemption. You can’t redeem someone who doesn’t WANT to be redeemed.

E:…*Sigh* you may have a point. It’s just…nothing we do is working on the guy. He’s still the same self entitled little brat he always was…can we please just go onto the review? I don’t want to think about this right now.

N: *Pats Ert on the back* You got it champ. Read the rest of this entry »