2121: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter 16

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 16
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags and BadJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your host, GoodJamags…

BadJamags: I hope you choke on your own spit and die.

And he’s your usual host and current guest host, BadJamags, and we’re here with more of the Shadow Warriors! Now, before we get started, here’s your chapterly news briefing:

Opener

Thank you, Anne.

Chapter 16: Ghost From The Past

Ooooooooh, a ghoooooooost! This is 2spooky4me!

BadJamags: It’s going to be a long day, isn’t it?

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2114: yandere gamzee x reader- the phantom of the school – “for your info” and Chapter 4

Title: yandere gamzee x reader- the phantom of the school
Author: otaisi
Media: Webcomic
Topic: Homestuck
Genre: Humor/Mystery
URL: “for your info” and Chapter 4
Critiqued by BatJamags (BadJamags) and Whirlybat von Flubbertybubble

I do Not Think it Means what You Think it Means count: 17

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your host, BatJamags…

Whirlybat: And I’m your guest guest host, Whirlybat von Flubbertybubble…

And we’re back with more of this deliciously awful readerfic! Goody. Now, let’s take a look at the next chapter.

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2108: yandere gamzee x reader- the phantom of the school – Chapter 3

Title: yandere gamzee x reader- the phantom of the school
Author: otaisi
Media: Webcomic
Topic: Homestuck
Genre: Humor/Mystery
URL: Chapter 3
Critiqued by BatJamags (BadJamags and Whirlybat von Flubbertybubble)

(Note: I promise the imitation-Homestuck formatting goes away in this riff and doesn’t come back. Apologies to those who were annoyed by it.)

I do Not Think it Means what You Think it Means count: 16

> BatJamags: Introduce the riff.

Huh? You’re not BatJamags.

> Who’s this douchebag?

Enter name, idiot.

> Enter name.

Your name is WHIRLYBAT VON FLUBBERTYBUBBLE.

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2102: yandere gamzee x reader- the phantom of the school – Chapter 2

Title: yandere gamzee x reader- the phantom of the school
Author: otaisi
Media: Webcomic
Topic: Homestuck
Genre: Humor/Mystery
URL: Chapter 2
Critiqued by BatJamags (BadJamags)

I do Not Think it Means what You Think it Means count: 16

Riffstuck

Your name is BATJAMAGS. You’re an idiot with an internet connection. Truly, a rare specimen. You have a wide variety of INTERESTS, most of which are, much like you, IDIOTIC. One of these interests is MAKING FUN OF BAD FANFICTION. You are quite certain this is a productive use of your time.

> BatJamags: Write the riff normally.

No.

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2097: yandere gamzee x reader- the phantom of the school – Chapter 1

Title: yandere gamzee x reader- the phantom of the school
Author: otaisi
Media: Webcomic
Topic: Homestuck
Genre: Humor/Mystery
URL: Chapter 1
Critiqued by BatJamags (BadJamags) and Whirlybat von Flubbertybubble

I do Not Think it Means what You Think it Means count: 11

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your host, BatJamags…

Whirlybat: And I’m your guest host, Whirlybat von Flubbertybubble…

And we’re back with more messy readerfic! What fun!

Chapter 1

You sit at home in your bed. In your hands is a little white letter. Again. You read it over and over again. The same few words every time.

This is notable because letters are well known for having different content every time you read them.

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2091: yandere gamzee x reader- the phantom of the school – Prologue

Title: yandere gamzee x reader- the phantom of the school
Author: otaisi
Media: Webcomic
Topic: Homestuck
Genre: Humor/Mystery
URL: Prologue
Critiqued by BatJamags (BadJamags) and Whirlybat von Flubbertybubble

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your host, BatJamags, and I’m back with-

Whirlybat von Flubbertybubble: WHIRLYBAT VON FLUBBERTYBUBBLE STRIKES AGAIN!

You didn’t have to say your name. We can see it right there in your nametag.

Whirlybat von Flubbertybubble: Well, “I strike again!” wouldn’t be very cool, would it?

You say that like the thing you said was cool.

Whirlybat von Flubbertybubble: But it was ironic!

I’ll give you one thing; you’re a master of segues.

Since this is a fandom that hasn’t come up much on this website, I am left with the Herculean task of *shivers* explaining Homestuck. First, it is a thing. Second, the type of thing that it is, is kind of similar to a webcomic, and the word “webcomic” is really much more descriptive than the word “thing,” which is why I put that up in the “Media” spot.

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2085: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter 15

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 15
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your host, BatJamags, and I’m back with another installment of The Shadow Warriors!

Last time, we finished up the chapter really early, so that was great fun. Oh, and something probably happened in the story, too.

Chapter 15: A New Villain

I’m sure he’ll be well thought-out and interestingly characterized.

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