2073: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter 13

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 13
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your host, BatJamags, and I’m back with another chapter of the fic that’s making me realize that seventy chapters is too many chapters. Let’s get started, shall we?

Chapter 13: One Thing left to do

Leave poor Ben alone!

Authors Note: Okay I should have mentioned this last chapter but most of the writing at the end I got from Tonycakes story Just for Laughs.

 You… “got it” from the story? What do you mean by that?

I’ll be back soon.

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2067: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter 12 Part 2

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 12
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your host, BatJamags, and I’m back with more of The Shadow Warriors, the fic that’s about to have a Big Twist™. How do I know this (other than the fact that I already finished the riff and am writing this introduction as I split it in half)? Because the chapter title is “Revelations,” so unless it’s about the Bible, I’m guessing we’re in for a shocking twist.

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2060: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter 12 Part 1

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 12
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your host, BatJamags, and hey, this fic exists.

Unfortunately.

Chapter 12: Revelations

That’s right, you fools! It was me all along!

I STOLE THE COOKIE FROM THE COOKIE JAR!

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2054: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter 11 Part 2

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: “Justice League”
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 11
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

WARNING: This chapter contains a generic, exaggerated, and vaguely sloppy (not to mention sloppily vague) depiction of parental physical abuse. Whoopee.

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your host, BatJamags, and I’m back with the second half of this obnoxious monster chapter of The Shadow Warriors. Last time, Edgelord was saved from being beaten up by Batman, Robin, and Nightwing by author fiat and got sent to prison in a more logical alternate dimension while the one we’ve been following continued to go after Joker.

The warriors slowly moved forward down the dirty horrific halls as they continued their search. They moved cautiously as they noticed Shadow started to cough, then Gauntlet and the Ronin.

Did you not stop to think that when Joker asked what you were afraid of, just maybe he meant you were going to be hit with fear gas (since you already knew Scarecrow was involved) and to think that just maybe you should’ve taken precautions against that?

I’m guessing not.

Because you all suck. Especially Shadow.

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2048: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter 11 Part 1

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 11
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your host, BatJamags, and I already riffed this chapter.

I kind of forgot to save the document. So if I sound more bored than usual, that’s why.

Chapter 11: Where To Look

Where to look for what? A good fanfic? Not here.

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1970: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter Ten

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 10
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags) and Kane

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your guest host, BatJamags, and I’m back with more of The Shadow Warriors, the fic that I’m just about to take a break from!

The fic from which I’m just about to take a break!

There, that’s better. The point is, it’s chapter 10! Let’s get started with the (probably boring) author’s note!

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1964: The Shadow Warriors – Chapter Nine, Part Two

Title: The Shadow Warriors
Author: Shadow knight1121
Media: Comics
Topic: Justice League
Genre: Crime/Mystery
URL: Chapter 9
Critiqued by BatJamags (GoodJamags)

Hello once again, patrons! I’m your guest host, BatJamags, and I’m back with more of The Shadow Warriors, the fic that is down to its last quarter of a redemption cookie.

Last time, a new character named ? first-person narrated her way through some actually decent dialogue and characterization and a party involving Bruce Wayne and Edgelord. Then the Joker showed up.

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