1715: Digiball Z: The Movie – Chapter Five

Title: Digiball Z: The Movie
Author: Dakari-King Mykan
Media: Anime
Topic: Digimon/Dragonball Z
Genre: Adventure/Action/Crossover
URL:  Chapter Five
Critiqued by AwkwardFerret

So, uh…bit of a hiatus. School started up again and I wanted a chance to get accustomed before resuming this. But now that I’m free, let’s go!

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1642: Digiball Z: The Movie – Chapter Four

Title: Digiball Z: The Movie
Author: Dakari-King Mykan
Media: Anime
Topic: Digimon/Dragonball Z
Genre: Adventure/Action/Crossover
URL:  Chapter Four
Critiqued by AwkwardFerret

Warning: Mykan is homophobic and sexist, and it shows in this chapter.  Blatantly.  *hefts Carlos*  Be prepared.  -Lyle

CHAPTER FOUR

Authors Notes:

I know the original Jakostu character is a male, but I just can’t stand anymore of those repulsive Homosexual acts. So I’m making this Jakotsu a girl.

Wh…holy shit, that’s quite the way to start off a chapter, gotta say! I mean, that’s Chris-Chan territory, there…

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1625: Digiball Z: The Movie – Chapter Three

Title: Digiball Z: The Movie
Author: Dakari-King Mykan
Media: Anime
Topic: Digimon/Dragonball Z
Genre: Adventure/Action/Crossover
URL:  Chapter Three
Critiqued by AwkwardFerret

CHAPTER THREE

The Giant Digimon Eating Monster

I wish all titles were that to the point.

As the boys walked on by following the Energy Davis sensed, they came across a little rookie Digimon who seemed lost and frightened.

Little rookie Digimon: “Oh, no, I’m in Digiball Z! This is horrible!”

“Excuse us.” Said Tai, “But what’s a little guy like you doing way out here all alone?”

“Oh, it was horrible, simply horrible.” The small Digimon cried. “My name is Gonzomon, and I’m from a village that recently was destroyed.”

“Destroyed? By what?” asked Agumon.

Little rookie Digimon: “Insufficient water treatment!”

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1597: Digiball Z: The Movie – Chapter Two

Title: Digiball Z: The Movie
Author: Dakari-King Mykan
Media: Anime
Topic: Digimon/Dragonball Z
Genre: Adventure/Action/Crossover
URL:  Chapter Two
Critiqued by AwkwardFerret

LAST TIME ON DIGIBALL Z:

The Digi-Z Fighters or…whatever the fuck they’re called…make their debut, putting away a group of delinquents without any effort, just like always! But is all as idyllic as it seems? It’s time to find out, on DIGIBALL Z!

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1579: Digiball Z: The Movie – Chapter One

Title: Digiball Z: The Movie
Author: Dakari-King Mykan
Media: Anime
Topic: Digimon/Dragonball Z
Genre: Adventure/Action/Crossover
URL:  Chapter One
Critiqued by AwkwardFerret

Note: Many of the riffs contain sexual references that may be off-putting to some. The original story does not contain any graphic sexual content.

Welcome, one and all, to my first submission to The Library! I’ve had some amount of experience with fanfic riffing before, on a forum known as Project AFTER. Unfortunately, well…some drama happened, and AFTER is largely dead. However, one particular riff (or “mock”, as the forum called it) still stands out to me, of a particularly execrable story by the infamous Dakari-King Mykan, known as Digiball Z: A New Era of Power.

Long story short, Davis is emo because Kari keeps putting out for TK instead of him, so he whines to the ghost of his dad and he and Veemon get superpowers. Then he blows up Myotismon, who’s also Cell for some reason, and they use a bunch of fake Dragon Balls that Gennai made to fix everything and give everybody else superpowers. Also, Gatomon and Veemon become a couple because…Kari and Davis become a couple, I guess? The point is, it sucked dick, and the original mock can be read here:

http://www.projectafterforums.com/index.php?showtopic=677

But it turns out DKM wrote a number of sequels to this opus, variously ripping off Dragonball Z and other sources. This one in particular seems to borrow a plot from Inuyasha for no immediately obvious reason. But enough talk! It’s time to riff:

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1311: DragonballZ: Bardock, The Lone Survivor FINISHED – Chapter One

Title: DragonballZ: Bardock, The Lone Survivor FINISHED
Author: trunks1138
Media: Anime/Manga
Topic: Dragon Ball Z
Genre:  Adventure/Suspense
URL:  Chapter One
Critiqued by KittyNoodles

[Kitty enters the Snark Booth and sits down, cradling a cup of hot tea between her hands and wrapped in a warm, fluffy blanket. She sniffles periodically, but otherwise seems much healthier than she did during her last riff.]

Kitty: Hello, everyone! I know I keep threatening to force all of you to sit through my riff of… That-Which-We-Must-Not-Name… but I wanted to do a goofy fic first, or else risk turning into the Gloomriffer for all of eternity. While that does sound like a sweet riffer title (and I call dibs on said title if it hasn’t already been taken,) even I occasionally enjoy a crackier idiotfic now and then.

I don’t have any co-riffers along with me today because frankly five of my OCs laughed at me when I asked, two (potentially three) are in reserve for That-Which-Causes-Small-Children-To-Weep, and the rest of my named OCs are either in the wrong fandom or don’t even know what the hell riffing is.

(As an added note, I tallied all of the named OCs in my original canon alone and they total around eighty. I honestly did not expect the number to hit forty.)

Today’s fic is a Dragon Ball Z fic – which appears to be in short supply around here, which in turn means there’s fool’s gold laying about in bundles waiting to be scooped up – about one of my favorite DBZ characters, Bardock.

This is normally the part where I summarize the Dragon Ball meta-series (created by Akira Toriyama, and of which DBZ is the second part,) but since I have absolutely no idea where to start, Im’ma let Wikipedia help me out here:

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945: Dragon Ball E! – Chapter One

Title: Dragon Ball E!
Author: firelifeblizzard
Media: Anime/Manga
Topic: Dragonball Z
Genre: Adventure & Suspense
URL: Chapter One
Critiqued by KittyNoodles

Hello, everybody! Since our very dear friend Writer of Eryn Lasgalen hasn’t yet posted the fourteenth and supposedly final chapter of To Love Another Soul, I’ve decided to look for another long-ish fic to start riffing while we wait.

Plus, I need something to do once TLAS does finally end.

Fortunately, I stumbled across a treasure trove of terrible Dragonball Z fanfictions by ficcer firelifeblizzard, who just happens to have in his portfolio a DBZ fic by the same name as the one I was trying to find (Dragonball E by Trajku, which was MSTed by my favorite DBZ author of all time, Dragoness Eclectic.)

For those who are not aware, Akira Toriyama’s Dragon Ball metaseries follows the adventures of Son Goku, a curious and very… world-unwise boy with a bad case of bedhead, a monkey’s tail, and a penchant for whomping everybody in sight who attempts to battle him or threaten the safety of the Earth or any innocent lives. It’s later revealed that Goku is a Saiyan, a shapeshifting alien from a mostly-extinct race of space pirates. Shenanigans ensue, and every now and again these things called dragon balls are gathered up so that wishes can be granted by the magical dragon genie that they summon. The fair majority of these wishes are spent bringing dead people back to life.

More comprehensive information on the series, episodes, and characters can be found at the official site.

In order to get ourselves nice and acquainted-like with Evan’s… work… let’s take a dip into his version of Dragonball E—or, as he calls it, Dragon Ball E!

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