1715: Digiball Z: The Movie – Chapter Five

Title: Digiball Z: The Movie
Author: Dakari-King Mykan
Media: Anime
Topic: Digimon/Dragonball Z
Genre: Adventure/Action/Crossover
URL:  Chapter Five
Critiqued by AwkwardFerret

So, uh…bit of a hiatus. School started up again and I wanted a chance to get accustomed before resuming this. But now that I’m free, let’s go!

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1653: A New Metal Cyborg Trio! – Chapter Three, Part Two

Title: A New Metal Cyborg Trio!
Author: bopdog111
Media: Video Game
Topic: Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance
Genre: Adventure/Mystery
URL: Chapter Three
Critiqued by SC, Dagger and Broadsword

Hello, and welcome back to A New Metal Cyborg Trio!, by bopdog111! I’m your host, SC, and I finally got sick of the running gag!

When we last left off, Raiden and Captain Dumbass became buddies, which didn’t fly with Madison and Wolf, who proceeded to engage in battle with the two. Wolf did admirably, despite failing miserably, whereas Madison was a whole heaping mess of uselessness.

So, I tried getting into contact with Scarlet and his team, since Cobalt and Bear couldn’t have told me no any clearer if they screamed it through a megaphone at me. I suppose I should have seen it coming, but Scarlet also said no. I didn’t want to risk talking to either of Dole’s right-hand men, or even Dole, himself, and I technically already involved Solaris in the riff, via Roy, so that left me with one other major faction who I touched upon but, as of yet, haven’t really given the spotlight to: The Aegis Vanguard, Solaris’ archnemesis and a frequent thorn in Guardian PMC’s side.

My guests this week are, surprisingly, the men in charge of the Aegis Vanguard – as busy as they are, I can’t fathom how they found the time to join me for a riff.

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1642: Digiball Z: The Movie – Chapter Four

Title: Digiball Z: The Movie
Author: Dakari-King Mykan
Media: Anime
Topic: Digimon/Dragonball Z
Genre: Adventure/Action/Crossover
URL:  Chapter Four
Critiqued by AwkwardFerret

Warning: Mykan is homophobic and sexist, and it shows in this chapter.  Blatantly.  *hefts Carlos*  Be prepared.  -Lyle

CHAPTER FOUR

Authors Notes:

I know the original Jakostu character is a male, but I just can’t stand anymore of those repulsive Homosexual acts. So I’m making this Jakotsu a girl.

Wh…holy shit, that’s quite the way to start off a chapter, gotta say! I mean, that’s Chris-Chan territory, there…

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1625: Digiball Z: The Movie – Chapter Three

Title: Digiball Z: The Movie
Author: Dakari-King Mykan
Media: Anime
Topic: Digimon/Dragonball Z
Genre: Adventure/Action/Crossover
URL:  Chapter Three
Critiqued by AwkwardFerret

CHAPTER THREE

The Giant Digimon Eating Monster

I wish all titles were that to the point.

As the boys walked on by following the Energy Davis sensed, they came across a little rookie Digimon who seemed lost and frightened.

Little rookie Digimon: “Oh, no, I’m in Digiball Z! This is horrible!”

“Excuse us.” Said Tai, “But what’s a little guy like you doing way out here all alone?”

“Oh, it was horrible, simply horrible.” The small Digimon cried. “My name is Gonzomon, and I’m from a village that recently was destroyed.”

“Destroyed? By what?” asked Agumon.

Little rookie Digimon: “Insufficient water treatment!”

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1609: A New Metal Cyborg Trio! – Chapter Three, Part One

Title: A New Metal Cyborg Trio!
Author: bopdog111
Media: Video Game
Topic: Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance
Genre: Adventure/Mystery
URL: Chapter Three
Critiqued by SC, Commander Margot Delacroix and Roy Saint

Margot:

Commander. Please. I’m begging you. Don’t do it to me again.

Margot:

Look, I know about the title, I know it’s… how it is, and I’ve been reminded every single time I’ve tried to open a riff. PLEASE don’t do it to me again!

Margot: …That certainly is a name.

Whew! Thank you. You have no idea how annoying that’s been for-

Specs, poking his head in: Hey, guys! What’s going on in he- wow! Check out that redundant fic title!

*Alarms Blare*

*An aura of sheer rage snaps into existence around SC as though he had suddenly burst into flames*

YOU MOTHERFUCKING SON OF A WHORE I’M GONNA TAKE THAT GOD DAMN SWORD AND FUCKING DESTROY YOUR ASSHOLE WITH IT!!!

Specs: Uh oh.

*Specs makes a tactical retreat as SC the Hate Meteor rockets out into the hall after him, firing bullets wildly – much to the misfortune of the approaching DRD squad, who have no time to dive for cover*

Roy: Here’s a benefit to being a cyborg: I can turn my ears off at any time I so choose.

Margot: Were that we all could be so privileged…

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1597: Digiball Z: The Movie – Chapter Two

Title: Digiball Z: The Movie
Author: Dakari-King Mykan
Media: Anime
Topic: Digimon/Dragonball Z
Genre: Adventure/Action/Crossover
URL:  Chapter Two
Critiqued by AwkwardFerret

LAST TIME ON DIGIBALL Z:

The Digi-Z Fighters or…whatever the fuck they’re called…make their debut, putting away a group of delinquents without any effort, just like always! But is all as idyllic as it seems? It’s time to find out, on DIGIBALL Z!

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1589: A New Metal Cyborg Trio! – Chapter Two, Part Two

Title: A New Metal Cyborg Trio!
Author: bopdog111
Media: Video Game
Topic: Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance
Genre: Adventure/Mystery
URL: Chapter Two
Critiqued by SC, Rogue and Saber

Saber: …Interesting title.

Please don’t set off the DRD on me for the third week in a row with that.

Saber: No worries. I have no intention of perpetuating a bad joke.

Thank yo-

Rogue: Wow! That sure is redundant!

*Alarms Blare*

Why?!

Saber: I said I wouldn’t perpetuate the joke. I made no such claims about Rogue.

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