2469: Slender man’s victims – Oneshot


Title: One Night on Halloween
Author: doctorwhofan123456789
Media: Video Game
Topic: Slender: The Eight Pages
Genre: Horror/Romance
URL: Chapter 1
Critiqued by Ghostcat



Hello, dear Patrons!

I know Spooktober is technically over for another year, but I refuse to let it die! Idecided to drag out another Slender fic because reasons. I’ve also taken massive amounts of cold medicine, so I really don’t have the cognitive faculties to work on anything too taxing right now.

[Note from FutureGhostie – I really shouldn’t write when tanked out of my gourd on Benadryl. My spelling and grammar suffer and I had to redo about two-thirds of this thing because I forgot to turn CapsLock off.]

Let’s take a look at the summary, shall we?

Two people gets lost in the woods. In the same forest slender man lives

Well, that’s certainly … succinct.

slender man’s victims

That would be the title, yes.

A slender fan fic

Just in case you thought a fic titled slender man’s victims  was actually a Wind in the Willows  fanfic.

Huh. I kind of wonder if that’s actually a thing.

…No, Ghostie; you can’t go off looking for more fanfics. Focus, girl.

“Bye mom, me and samantha are going for a walk” josh shouted at his mom.

Good-bye, random person who is probably going to die soon.

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2457: The myths of Slender Man/ Rainbow Dash visits Brennenburg – Oneshots

Title: The myths of Slender Man
Author: dmr131313
Media: Video Game/TV Show
Topic: Slender: The Eight Pages/My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Genre: no genre given
URL: Chapter 1
Critiqued by Ghostcat


Title: Rainbow Dash visits Brennenburg
Author: dmr131313
Media: Video Game/TV Show
Topic: Amnesia: The Dark Descent/My Little Pony:Friendship is Magic
Genre: no genre given
URL: Chapter 1
Critiqued by Ghostcat


Hello, dear Patrons, and welcome to my first Spooktober double-shot! Both fics are by the same author and both are My Little Pony crossovers with horror games, so there’s an underlying theme of sorts.

This first fic is another slice of Slender Man and is what first drew me to this author. This particular fic is a crossover of Slender with My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic! You can tell because that is literally all the summary says.

this is a short fanfic story the includes Slender and MLP

Because if anything makes you think of Slender Man, it’s My Little Ponies.

To start off I would like to say that I am a horror kind of person so I will be writing 2 horror fanfics with MLP that are short but may not be that short

I’ve read both horror fics and they are both super short; this fic is approximately seven hundred and fifty words and the other is just a touch over five hundred and fifty. Neither one is very good. I’m sure it’s possible to write a decent horror-themed MLP:FiM fic, but I’ve yet to read one that is both actually scary and manages to keep the characters acting like their canon selves.

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2450: Project: Der Schlanker Mann – Oneshot

Title: Slender
Author: optimus27000
Media: Video Game
Topic: Slender: The Eight Pages
Genre: Horror/Supernatural
URL: Chapter 1
Critiqued by Ghostcat



Hello, dear Patrons, and welcome to yet more ‘interesting’ interpretations of Slendpai.

This fic has a very … brief summary.

This is the origin of the infamous Slender Man

Based on my extensive experience reading Slender Man fics, it’s probably going to be one of three things; alien/cryptid species, evil science experiment, or he’s going to be some sort of supernatural entity.

Project:Der Schlanker Mann

You know it’s going to be scary ’cause it’s in German.

I’m going to warn you that this fic is one dense Wall-o-Text that doesn’t even have spaces between the (run-on) sentences, so I’m going to do my best to chop it into more manageable bricks.

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2443: Slender – Oneshot

Title: Slender
Author: TheWanderingSaint
Media: Video Game
Topic: Slender: The Eight Pages
Genre: Horror/Supernatural
URL: Chapter 1
Critiqued by Ghostcat




Hello, dear Patrons, and welcome to my first Spooktober offering! Which, to absolutely no one’s surprise, is a Slender Man fic. It’s not a tentacle rape fic, though, even though I had an embarrassment of riches to pull from.

Let’s take a look at the summary to see why this one drew my attention.

Can anyone escape the beast known as Slender Man? Oneshot. I know this story is everywhere, but it’s supposed to be chaotic. Whether or not I succeeded is up to you.

Good to see you’re setting the bar low early, author.

Perhaps it’s just the old tabletop gamer in me, but any time I see someone claim they’re going to be going “chaotic” it usually makes me think they are going to try to get away with doing whatever the hell they want and then blame any inconsistencies in behaviour on their alignment.

I never should have let him out of his cage! I sprinted down the hallway. I could feel him behind me.

…I might have grabbed one of the Slendtai fics by mistake.

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2420: A walk in the woods-slender x reader- – Oneshot

Title: A walk in the woods-slenderxreader-
Author: sadistictriangle
Media: Video Game/Creepypasta
Topic: Slender
Genre: Romance
URL: Chapter 1
Critiqued by Ghostcat







Hello, dear Patrons!

I’ve been out of town in Georgia for a con for the last few days, so I decided to hunt up a quick oneshot instead of trying to start something big. And, as luck would have it, SC posted a Slender Man reaction gif in the Secret Clubhouse that made me think “Hey, I haven’t worked on a Slender Man fic in a while, I should go see what I can find.” which means that, in a roundabout way, this is all SC’s fault.

Now to take a look at the summary!

 blarb. this is my first fanfiction. it is about slendy and you. it gets lemonish, so be warned.

…I immediately regret my life decisions. And now I have to go put a warning in the header and send an apology gift basket to Whirlybat.

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2169: An Un-Forgetful Summer – Chapters 1 & 2

Title: Un-Forgetful Summer
Author: IceyFox98
Media: Video Game
Topic: Slender: the Eight Pages/Portal/SCP: Containment Breach?
Genre: Sci-Fi/Adventure
URL: Chapter 1
URL: Chapter 2
Critiqued by Ghostcat




Hello, dear Patrons, and welcome to another short little fic from the Slender section of ff.net. As an added bonus, this one bills itself as a crossover with the Portal series, because that’s definitely a thing that should exist. It’s not like having a gun that allows you to instantaneously step away from wherever Slender Man is would eliminate any of tension typically found in the source materials or anything.

Let’s take a look at the summary, shall we?

A 16 year old boy named James hopes that his Summer will be more exciting since most of his friends are off to camp or just out of state. But he finds himself pulled into something he didn’t bargain for.

That’s probably one of the most generic sounding descriptions I’ve read in a long time, but at least the author didn’t go with the old favorite “I suk at summeries, plez read!” or something similar.

A Un-Forgetful Summer
Chapter 1

In case you forgot what you were reading between the time you clicked on the fic and it opened.

I stared at the ceiling of my room silently thinking to myself. The clock beside my bed radiating a faint red glow.
“2 in the morning” I said to myself as if anyone would care.

Trust me, I don’t.

It’s been 3 days since school ended and I’ve been finding it hard to fall asleep more and more each night.

So? I don’t know how it is for other people, but whenever I have the chance to set my own hours and not adhere to a schedule – like on the weekends or during holidays – I tend to stay up later because I know I don’t have to get up at a certain time. Add in my irregular insomnia and I doubt I’ve had anything resembling a “normal” sleep pattern for years.

After a good 5 minutes of watching the ceiling be a ceiling I get up and quietly slip out of my window onto the roof. I live in a nice two story house, so I have a nice view of my block.

That sounds kind of dangerous, but I’ve lived in a two-story house with a porch where you could climb out of the upper story window and sit on the porch roof.

  Usually watching the stars makes me sleepy. And I could feel it creeping up on my restless body. Before I slipped back inside a faint shine flew across the sky.
“A shooting star!” I said in excitement.
I closed my eyes and wished with all my heart. I slept back inside and crawl into bed. Slowly, but surely, falling asleep.

Apparently, getting super excited at seeing a shooting star makes it much easier to fall asleep. I would think it would be the exact opposite, but there you go.

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2162: the dare – Oneshot

Title: the dare
Author: odvie
Media: Video Game
Topic: Slender: the Eight Pages
Genre: Supernatural
URL: Chapter 1
Critiqued by Ghostcat








Hello, dear Patrons, and welcome to another Slender Man fic! This particular oneshot has what can only be described as a very minimal summary.

 A woman spends the night in the forest as a dare, not aware of the creature lurking in the shadows. Rating T for safety.

That could literally apply to any of a number of different animals and mythical creatures.

Hello everyone, I’m just trying to write in english, so be nice with me. ^^’

The author is a native French speaker and this is one of only two fics they have written in English; that said, the structure isn’t all that bad. There are a few quirks but they aren’t really what drew my attention. Not by a long shot.

It’s based on a personnal theory about the slenderman being able to feed on energy instead of souls (so he doesn’t have to kill his preys) or flesh.

Which is a very intriguing theory, and would explain how he can “feed” without having any visible mouth.

After all, we don’t know much about him…

The Slender Man is a child born of the Internet who has evolved his own mythos, but there are still gaps that a clever author could make use of.

Please enjoy the little text.

I assume that means ‘short story’ and isn’t a reference to the font size.

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