2419: Kirby: Welcome to Smash Bros – Chapter Two

Title: Kirby: Welcome to Smash Bros
Author: Quartz2006
Media: Video Game
Topic: Super Smash Bros.
Genre: Romance
URL: Chapter 2
Critiqued by Elysium16 and Rimura

(In an empty room, tucked away in a corner of the Library…)

Elysium: Welcome back to Kirby: Welcome to Smash Bros!

Rimura: Last time, absolutely nothing of note happened. Well, aside from the main character turning out to be adorable, of course.

Elysium: Aha! So you admit it!

Rimura: *sigh*

Elysium: This time, we’ve upgraded! Now, instead of the kitchen, we get our own room to riff in! Of course, the decorating’s not done yet, but I’m sure we’ll get everything organized by the fic’s end.

…oh, and we’re actually going to start the story! Ain’t that lovely.

Chapter 2: Sad News

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