Title: Love and War
Author: Z3R0 L0V3
Media: Video Game
Genre: Adventure / Romance
URL: Chapter 3
Critiqued by eatpraylove
Welcome back to “Love and War,” everyone! I’m your guest host, eatpraylove, and last chapter a whole bunch of stuff happened in a very poorly defined amount of time. More specifically, Princess Dawn got chewed out by her parents for having a friend on the castle staff (that being Ash the stableboy), they held a surprisingly belated welcome party for Prince Paul, I paid the Library ten imaginary dollars, and the cliché counter hit double digits and its first side orders of “why”!
Oh, and she’s supposed to marry Paul in a week (thanks to TacoMagic for confirming that a week is indeed way too short for medieval political marriages) and we still have no idea why this is even happening.
Well, the only way out is forward, as some smart guy once said. So let’s get back to it.
Cliché counter: Eleven with a double dose of “why”.
*flops into comfy riffing chair*