Title: The Marissa Games
Author: Marissa the Writer
Media: Books/Movies/Video Games
Topic: The Hunger Games / Portal / MIB II / Team Fortress / Thomas the Trai- [Fuck it, I’m not adding any more to this list! – Lyle] The Kitchen Sink
Genre: Not Listed
URL: Chapter Eleven
Critiqued by agigabyte and Ghostcat
Not a Verb Counter: 768
Scatology Counter: 103
*Cain and Goddess are bickering about something or other, waiting for Ghostie and Syl to arrive*
Cain: Again, this simply won’t work. We don’t have the numbers to tide Vagueness’s apparently infinite-
Goddess: Not just yours, perhaps, but-
Cain: Wait a moment. Monitor, attain my permission before beginning the recording, in the future.
Goddess: Also, that was a dick move.
(Very well. -Monitor)
Cain: Now, anyway, if I’m right, Syl and Ghostie will arrive, bursting through the door… now.
:Everyone stares at the door in anticipation:
Cain: … Any moment now.