Title: Fall to Equestria
Topic: My Little Pony: FIM
Critiqued by AdmiralSakai and Serketry
While there’s nothing at all explicit for a change, this chapter does contain some potential flamebait in the form of nonconsensual Changeling ‘seduction’ attempts.
Hello hello, all you patrons, and welcome back to the horror that is Fall of Equestria.
Last time Loser Martin got into a pretty explicit ‘massage’ with Aloe and Lotus…
And racked up a bunch more sexual favors…
… then had the ‘pleasure’ of finding Princess Luna sleeping ontop of him like the world’s largest, pointiest housecat before someone or something
Wasn’t me! (Though I wish it was…)
finally did what we’ve all been wanting to do since Chapter One and knocked him out cold.
Bad touch counter: 47
He woke up in a room with green slime and a mattress, and that brings us to Chapter Twelve, “Understanding the misunderstood”.