Title: Love & Bullets
URL: Chapter 9
Critiqued by BatJamags (BadJamags and GoodJamags)
What do you need us for? count: 12
Dick is a dick count: 7
Bullet count: 0
Hello, once again, patrons! I’m your guest host, BadJamags…
GoodJamags: … And I’m your guest guest host, GoodJamags…
… And we’re back for more of Love & Bullets, the fic where I’ve literally lost count of how many chapters it’s been since the plot moved forward. So far, the format has just been:
Someone points out something entirely logical.
A pointless flashback meant to counter their point happens, but fails to actually address the point.
A cliffhanger happens that doesn’t actually lead to anything different from what we’ve been seeing this whole time.
GoodJamags: So, let’s hope that chapter nine will actually do something.
If it does, it’ll be after the canned author’s note.
GoodJamags: And the line break! Don’t forget the line break!