Title: Heroes and Villains
Author: Horrible’s Igor
Media: Television / Movies
Topic: Buffy: The Vampire Slayer / Kitchen Sink
URL: Heroes and Villains
Critiqued by TacoMagic and Eliza
Heyo, patrons! Welcome back to Heroes and Villains. As luck would have it, last week something actually happened! Somewhat. It was stupidly executed and mired in lots of unnecessary dialogue, but I’ll take it. I’ll hand it off to Eliza to elucidate.
“Elsa poisoned Buffy and Jimmy with a PCC chocolate cake!”
See! It was a thing! And it totally happened!
Otherwise, the first half of the chapter was relatively devoid of anything interesting.
“Other than Olaf secretly being Solid Snake and Sam Fischer rolled into one, bubbly package.”
Or maybe the villains are just every bit as incompetent as we think they are and Olaf is just bumbling around without them noticing.
“I like my version better.”