411: From Another World – Chapter 2

Title: From Another World
Author: EclipsePheniox
Media: Video Game
Topic:  Mass Effect / Parallel Realities
Genre: Supernatural/Romance/AU
URL: From Another World Chapter 2
Critiqued by Erttheking

Chapter 2: A New Life

Wow, who would’ve thought that a talentless hack like me would’ve gotten attention on the same website as the author of Mass Effect Vexations?  Well, I’ll try not to disappoint  When we last left off, Shepard was stranded in another galaxy after his Dad dodged bullets, but got killed by a knife because if he didn’t die we wouldn’t have “dead dad” to add to “dead mom, dead sisters, crippled race and stuck away from home.”  He was found by the then Lieutenant Anderson and Ashley’s father, and brought onto their ship to receive medical treatment because he had a fever…for some reason.  The chapter ended with a five year old Ashley looking into the room, with the words “I will be you love interest,” practically tattooed to her forehead.  Well, moving on.

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