213: call of duty:the untold zombie chronicels – Chapter Six

Title: call of duty:the untold zombie chronicels
Author: insane doctor and judgmentdragon25
Media: Video Game/Movie
Topic: Call of Duty/Land Before Time Cross-Over
Genre: None Listed
URL: call of duty:the untold zombie chronicels – Chapter Six
Critiqued by TacoMagic

Warning: This chapter is icky.  Don’t read it.  At all.  Ever.  In fact, don’t even read my riff of it.  Go outside and play.  Right now.  It’s not safe for children and other living things.  You have been warned.

Seriously, you have better things to do than continue.

Hello and welcome back to call of duty:the untold zombie chronicels!  It’s been a few weeks, so let’s catch up on where we left off:

Lets see here, there is a team of temporally nonsensical Gary Stus which includes three author insertions.  There’s also a group of dinosaurs from the Land Before Time movies.  They number 22 in total, but, for reasons never explained, two of them are missing at this point since the group is described many times as numbering only 20.  Team Stu blew up the Great Valley (home of the Land Before Time dinosaurs) after it was overrun with zombie velociraptors.  The team ran for a while and eventually made their way to the island home of Chomper’s parents.  While there, they bivouac down for the night in a Gary Stu version of a Cave only to realize that the zombie raptors have teleported to the island somehow (or a small number of them learned to swim, whatever).   This gives the dino members of Team Stu the opportunity to find some convieniently-placed uber weapons and save the day.  That leads us to now.

And, since it’s the start of Chapter 6, it’s time to load up the comma detector again.

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