Title: When you love someone
Author: hot-chick down under
Topic: House M.D.
URL: When you love someone – Chapter One
Critiqued by Frozenpoodlemeat
Since we had so much fun with hot-chick down under’s last Cameron abomination (and because I’ve been too worn out to look for something else), I thought we would delve right into another story by this “author.” This one is called, “When you love someone.”
This story involves another Cameron family member that doesn’t exist in show canon, but of course something like canon would never slow our author down. While the other story had its problems, this one has something I truly hate: the wall of text. God created paragraphs for a reason, people. Get with the program!