133: call of duty:the untold zombie chronicels – Chapter 2, Part 1

Title: call of duty:the untold zombie chronicels
Author: insane doctor and judgmentdragon25
Media: Video Game / Movie
Topic: Call of Duty / Land Before Time Cross-Over
Genre: None Listed
URL: call of duty:the untold zombie chronicels – Chapter Two
Critiqued by TacoMagic

Once again we strike out into the fetid depths of call of duty: the untold zombie chronicels. This week we start in on chapter 2, which, as I’ve mentioned in the comments sections of the first chapter, is so very worse than the first chapter. I know that’s hard to believe, but if you bear with me, I’ll prove it. It’s also more than twice as long, so I’m going to break it into three parts, both to draw this fic out even further, and to limit my exposure to it.

Recap? Sure. We have Team Gary Stu, consisting of members who range from seasoned combat veterans to dangerously unstable sociopathic killers. There are also two bad ass-author insertions who’ve come along for the ride. My guess is that at least one of those insertions is gonna be getting himself some dinosaur poon-tang, and for that I apologize in advance.

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