2853: Hatchling carer – Chapter 9

Title: Hatchling carer
Author: lunabloodmoon666
Media: Movie
Topic: Jurassic Park
Genre: Romance/Adventure
URL: Chapter 9
Critiqued by: Ghostcat

 

—CAUTION—

—CONTAINS SOME MATERIAL WHICH IS NSFC/NSFW—

— YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED—

 

Hello, dear Patrons, and welcome to the final chapter!

So what happened in the previous chapter?

:flips through notes:

Lots of fluids getting all over the place, and things were inserted where they should not have been. Just your run of the mill shower sex scene, only with a dinosaur.

To the fic!

I only own my own character Alex and sorry for the late update but I think until the next movie comes out I wont be doing a sequel but this is the last chapter on this story so I hope you all like it! :)

I feel as if the smiley face is mocking me.

Alex POV

I was frickin’s right about the perspective never changing! I feel good about being right, but also kind of dead on the inside.

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2852: Hatchling carer – Chapter 8

Title: Hatchling carer
Author: lunabloodmoon666
Media: Movie
Topic: Jurassic Park
Genre: Romance/Adventure
URL: Chapter 8
Critiqued by: Ghostcat

 

—CAUTION—

—CONTAINS MATERIAL WHICH IS NSFC/NSFW—

—YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED—

 

Standard greetings, Patrons!

The previous chapter was short and pointless, but seems to be leading up to some dinosaur on human sexy times, so there’s that to look forward to. Or I could be wrong and it is just going to be more pointlessness.

Here’s hoping!

I only own Alex, and I am sorry if the lemon scene isn’t that good,

:sighs:

It kind of sucks to be right sometimes.

I have only done a odd few before and someone helped me before this and she can’t help me with this so hopefully enjoy!

I have a feeling this is going to get very odd.

Because I have been really nervous over writing this lol :)

If you’re not comfortable writing about sex, then you probably shouldn’t be writing about sex.

Alex POV

Still no perspective change.

I have to put the page break here because it gets very naughty very fast.

There’s going to be a lot of fluids going around, so here’s your last chance to go look at kitten videos or something.

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2851: Hatchling carer – Chapter 7

Title: Hatchling carer
Author: lunabloodmoon666
Media: Movie
Topic: Jurassic Park
Genre: Romance/Adventure
URL: Chapter 7
Critiqued by: Ghostcat

 

 

 

 

Greetings once again, dear Patrons, and welcome back to the fic! We’re drizzling down to the tail-end; only two more after this one.

In the previous chapter, quite a lot of nothing happened and ALex started having “adult feelings” for Check because reasons, and possibly because fetishism.

To the fic.

I only own Alex

I would say that she’s a strong, independent woman who don’t need no one, but that is very much not how these fics go.

Alex POV

:headdesk:

Still all in the same perspective.

After my little break down Check had calmly kept me warm and gave the occasional nudge or lick absently.

Using the adverb “absently” completely changes the tone, since it implies that he is just making these gestures because she is there and not out of any “adult feelings” he might be having. I’m all for the change in tone, since it is less creepy, but I doubt it was intentional.

Currently, I was sat in his nest and he was curled around me while his head rested on mine looking around for any dangers, I was leaning against his body and my head rested on his shoulder as I remembered me and my brother and how different we were.

Everyone in this fic has the skeletal structure of a jellyfish.

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2850: Hatchling carer – Chapter 6

Title: Hatchling carer
Author: lunabloodmoon666
Media: Movie
Topic: Jurassic Park
Genre: Romance/Adventure
URL: Chapter 6
Critiqued by: Ghostcat

 

 

 

Welcome back, dear Patrons!

In the previous chapter, Alex followed the raptors to a surprisingly well-established nesting site given that they have only been out of their containment for less than a day, the alpha male Check was moderately creepy, and then Alex fainted after she realized that Check has decided to make her his mate. Because reasons.

I only own my OC Alex.

The disclaimers are getting shorter and shorter, as are the chapters.

Alex POV

:headdesk:

Seriously, why does every chapter have one of these? The perspective NEVER CHANGES!!!!

I awoke to being nudged, when I managed to open my eyes I saw Check looking at me with his reptilian eyes almost glowing with glee.

Well, that’s not creepy.

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2849: Hatchling carer – Chapter 5

Title: Hatchling carer
Author: lunabloodmoon666
Media: Movie
Topic: Jurassic Park
Genre: Romance/Adventure
URL: Chapter 5
Critiqued by: Ghostcat

 

 

Yello, dear Patrons, and welcome to another chapter!

This one marks the halfway point, and in the previous chapter the alpha Check and other velociraptors whose names I can’t bother remembering gathered the baby velociraptors and then left the visitor’s center to head towards what I assume will be the nesting area even though the velociraptors have been kept in a concrete box for most of their lives and only started roaming free the night before, but whatever. And also Alex was there, because someone has to name the velociraptors, I guess. They certainly don’t need her to open doors since they managed fine all on their own.

To the fic!

I own nothing but Alex and the plot, thank you for the follows, faves and reviews.

One hundred and six reviews, just putting that out there again.

Alex POV

:headdesk:

We were running through the trees, I assume Peach knew where we were going.

Is Peach the baby who they just liberated from a cat carrier? Because I don’t think following her would be a good idea in that case.

The four hatchlings were making sure to stay close to both myself and Peach who was going slower then her usual pace to make sure that the baby raptors didn’t get lost.

Yeah, it’s so the babies don’t get lost and not because you are from a weak-ass species that naturally-selected for endurance rather than speed. Just keep telling yourself that.

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