452: Twitanic – Chapter 7
Posted: May 17, 2013 Filed under: Titanic, Twilight, Twitanic, Twitanic | Tags: Book, Drama, Ghostcat, Movie, Romance, Titanic, Twilight 13 Comments »Title: Twitanic
Author: mentos93
Media: Movie/Book
Topic: Twilight/Titanic
Genre: Romance/Drama
URL: Chapter 7
Critiqued by Ghostcat
Hello once more, wonderous Patrons!
In the last pile of ponderous nothing I laid before you, not much happened. There was more conversation between Edward, Carlisle, and Rose – now with the added “excitement” of Anna-Bella, who probably still has no idea what’s going on. There was then a mid-chapter jump over to James (Transitions? What are those?) who impulsively decided to rummage through the attic and pulled out a few fragments of Edward’s back story that I’m still having trouble believing. There was then yet another unexplained hop over to Jack, where the Magic Alice Ball predicted an attack by Alaskan “wolfs”, prompting the clan of supernaturally strong sparklepires (who have plenty of time to set up a defense and nearly unlimited resources to throw into the project) to run away like scared children.
If the fic follows formula, this chapter will either pick up exactly where the last one ended, or there will be a sudden and unexplained scene shift to another location and/or character.
448: Don’t Stop Believing – Chapter Two
Posted: May 11, 2013 Filed under: Don't Stop Believing, Dragon Ball Z | Tags: Anime, Baffle Blend, Dragon Ball Z, Friendship, Movie, Romance, Television 23 Comments »Title: Don’t Stop Believing
Author: Emineminems
Media: Television / Movie
Topic: Dragon Ball Z
Genre: Friendship / Romance
URL: Don’t Stop Believing – Chapter Two
Critiqued By Baffle Blend
Welcome, welcome, patrons. Baffle Blend here again. I’m not in a good mood today, so let’s skip the theatrics and let’s get this shit over with.
Last time on Don’t Stop Believing, Trunks and Pan left two OCs that had no reason to be there. Then they got onto a subway- sorry I totally mean train, where they then proceed to have no idea where they’re sitting. Then it’s mushy stuff for the rest of the chapter.
I expect no differences here.
447: Twitanic – Chapter 6
Posted: May 10, 2013 Filed under: Titanic, Twilight, Twitanic, Twitanic | Tags: Book, Drama, Ghostcat, Movie, Romance, Titanic, Twilight 12 Comments »Title: Twitanic
Author: mentos93
Media: Movie/Book
Topic: Twilight/Titanic
Genre: Romance/Drama
URL: Chapter 6
Critiqued by Ghostcat
Welcome once more, dear Patrons, to another chapter of Twilight/Titanic … stuff.
In the last chapter the audience was treated to a brief glimpse into the head of James, Edward’s doppelgänger who just happens to be his grandson and the stepbrother of Rose’s ex-fiance. It was the typical “I’m not one of you!” sort of stuff, and not very memorable. The narration abruptly switched from first-person to third-person (because reasons, I guess) and then skipped over to where Rose was having awkward conversation with Edward and Carlisle in her apartment. Edward pumps her for information about James, but she tells them about James’ father instead. She then somehow deduces that they are “Vampires” even though they haven’t done anything that would cause her to suspect that they are somehow otherworldly and then tricks Carlisle into confirming this by spinning a little story about how her father was killed in the woods and she was saved by a wolf. They then reveal that Jack is a sparklepire now, causing Rose to faint just as a dark-haired woman opens the door.
Now, on to the chapter!
445: From Another World – Chapter 7
Posted: May 8, 2013 Filed under: From Another World, Mass Effect | Tags: Erttheking, Mass Effect, Parallel Realities, Romance, Supernatural, Video Game 7 Comments »Title: From Another World
Author: EclipsePheniox
Media: Video Game
Topic: Mass Effect / Parallel Realities
Genre: Supernatural/Romance/AU
URL: From Another World Chapter 7
Critiqued by Erttheking
Ert agreed to fill in for me this week since I’ve been busy taking care of guests and haven’t had any time to prepare a riff of my own.
-Taco
Sorry about the long update time, I’ve been as sick as a dog.
Ok, after the Union finally pulled its head out of its ass and made contact with Shepard, Shepard blew off Kim, waiting until she snogged him, and I couldn’t help but feel a little creeped out that the last time he had seen her and everyone else he had only been five, but I can’t think of anything big to make out of that.
Which is a pity
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444: Don’t Stop Believing – Chapter One
Posted: May 4, 2013 Filed under: Don't Stop Believing, Dragon Ball Z | Tags: Anime, Baffle Blend, Dragon Ball Z, Friendship, Movie, Romance, Television 15 Comments »Title: Don’t Stop Believing
Author: Emineminems
Media: Television / Movie
Topic: Dragon Ball Z
Genre: Friendship / Romance
URL: Don’t Stop Believing – Chapter One
Critiqued By Baffle Blend
Hello, fans of the Library. I, Baffle Blend, am also a fan of the library. And as a fan of the library, I-
*Siren blares*
*Click*
Shut up, DRD. If I’m going to be submitting a guest riff, I’m not going to be a copycat.
Anyway, I’m going to tackle a Dragon Ball Z fanfic by… “Emineminems”, and things already aren’t looking good. Just look at the summary.
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