445: From Another World – Chapter 7
Posted: May 8, 2013 Filed under: From Another World, Mass Effect | Tags: Erttheking, Mass Effect, Parallel Realities, Romance, Supernatural, Video Game 7 Comments »Title: From Another World
Author: EclipsePheniox
Media: Video Game
Topic: Mass Effect / Parallel Realities
Genre: Supernatural/Romance/AU
URL: From Another World Chapter 7
Critiqued by Erttheking
Ert agreed to fill in for me this week since I’ve been busy taking care of guests and haven’t had any time to prepare a riff of my own.
-Taco
Sorry about the long update time, I’ve been as sick as a dog.
Ok, after the Union finally pulled its head out of its ass and made contact with Shepard, Shepard blew off Kim, waiting until she snogged him, and I couldn’t help but feel a little creeped out that the last time he had seen her and everyone else he had only been five, but I can’t think of anything big to make out of that.
Which is a pity
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437: From Another World – Chapter 6
Posted: April 23, 2013 Filed under: From Another World, Mass Effect | Tags: AU, Erttheking, Mass Effect, Parallel Realities, Romance, Supernatural, Video Game 13 Comments »Title: From Another World
Author: EclipsePheniox
Media: Video Game
Topic: Mass Effect / Parallel Realities
Genre: Supernatural/Romance/AU
URL: From Another World Chapter 6
Critiqued by Erttheking
Chapter 6: True Identity
Starting chapter six and ohhhhhh boy these chapters are starting to get long. Anyway, we start off on the Presidium.
Shepard, Ashley and Kadian looked at the Presidium. Admiring the view from ambassador Udina’s office. Shepard had been to the Citadel twice with his foster parent’s. The place was impressive.
Uh…thank you…for that…vital info.
His mind wondered as he thought of the walk over to the embassy. Eyes where on him and giggling from teenage girls. All he did was smile back at them.
This kind of thing would make Ashley jealous but this time it didn’t. Her mind was wondering what John was going to say. She thought she knew him but all of that has know changed. After he woke up he seemed distant not talking like usual. She needed to find the right time to talk to him and find the truth.
Ah Christ, you’re going down the adoring fan route? That is annoying and contributes nothing to the story, end of discussion.
431: Parallel Realities – Chapter Forty-Eight, Part Two
Posted: April 11, 2013 Filed under: Mass Effect, Parallel Realities | Tags: AU, Herr Wozzeck, Mass Effect, Romance, Supernatural, Video Game 11 Comments »Title: Parallel Realities
Author: InHarmsWay
Media: Video Game
Topic: Mass Effect
Genre: Supernatural/Romance/AU
URL: Parallel Realities: Chapter 48
Critiqued by Herr Wozzeck
Oh hello there, children, and welcome back to the snarking of the final chapter of Parallel Realities. Yeah, this chapter is definitely a long one, I will tell you guys that.
And it was especially long ‘cause nothing happened during the first part of the chapter. Yeah, basically it was nothing but regurgitated exposition, tons of conversations, and antagonism between characters that kind of had no reason to exist at all.
Well, thankfully for us, we finally get to the action in this installment, so I’m sure you all want to see how badly it fails.
So without further ado, let’s continue.
429: From Another World – Chapters 5 and Ideas
Posted: April 9, 2013 Filed under: From Another World, Mass Effect | Tags: AU, Erttheking, Mass Effect, Parallel Realities, Romance, Supernatural, Video Game 8 Comments »Title: From Another World
Author: EclipsePheniox
Media: Video Game
Topic: Mass Effect / Parallel Realities
Genre: Supernatural/Romance/AU
URL: From Another World Chapter 5 and Ideas
Critiqued by Erttheking
The chapter starts with Kaiden and Jenkins suiting up, Shepard remarking that he felt pains across his body. He then goes to where the others are.
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