271: the story of us – Chapters Six to Nine

Title: the story of us
Author: nancydrew bfan
Media: Book
Topic: Nancy Drew/Hardy Boys Crossover
Genre: Romance and Supernatural
URL: the story of us
Critiqued by The Psychic Librarian

Welcome to the next exciting installment of the story of us, a Nancy Drew/Hardy Boys crossover. It has more holes than the holiest of Swiss cheeses. The plot skips about like a squirrel on meth. Time and space have no meaning which I would imagine would make watches pretty useless. In the first installment, we were introduced to Nancy Drew, Ned whats-his-face, Bess and her cousin George (short for Georgia), and some people that may or may not exist. There were some minor characters along the way that existed in the quantum flux and don’t really need to be bothered with. Nancy and her buddies George and Bess were riding along in their car when something involved a house burning. We weren’t invited into that part of the story.  Then a car hit their car and someone apologized to someone else. Along comes Ned to help Nancy out and it turns out that they remember each other from an encounter six years earlier at a karaoke club for kids. Flirting ensues. Time is meaningless. Finally it becomes apparent that somehow Ned has been kidnapped during a large swath of time we weren’t allowed to know anything about. Now Nancy has to go rescue Ned because Ned is useless. Oh and I should mention the slightly nuts Author’s Notes where Nancy and Ned apparently want to kill the author. By the way, the author would like you to know this is her first fanfic. Thus apparently she can do anything that she wants to the English Language and completely disregard the usual plot construction of a story. Now that we’ve got that cleared up, let’s move on to the story. You may need to bring your imagination caps along so you can keep up with the bits that are missing.

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