While I’m only passing familiar with the Call of Duty franchise, I do not think these ladies are adequately dressed for the situations depicted in the games.
Title: call of duty:the untold zombie chronicels
Author: insane doctor and judgmentdragon25
Media: Video Game/Movie
Topic: Call of Duty/Land Before Time Cross-Over
Genre: None Listed
URL: call of duty:the untold zombie chronicels – Chapter Eight
Critiqued by TacoMagic
Another Wednesday and another chapter of call of duty:the untold zombie cronicels; please try to contain your excitement. We’re still clipping along nicely here, this will make the third straight week where I can do a whole chapter in one sitting. Next week will be like that too, as Chapter Nine is really short from the look of it.
Last time on call of duty:the untold zombie chronicels: Team Stu fought more zombie raptors that had found the convieniently forgotten land bridge to the island. Luckily, Chomper forgot to wear his flying Death Machine Armor to the fight, which allowed a contrived plot device to assist in getting his parents removed from the story. Remember kids, parents have no business being in fanfiction; they just load down the story. So anyway, the quantum flux vomits up another land bridge and Team Stu is able to flee across it to some temporary safety. They blow it up behind them with some C4 because, apparently, they had only one tactical clean-nuke and they already used it on The Great Valley.
As this is a fresh chapter, it’s time to crank up the ol’ comma detector.