279: Lament of Day – One Shot

Title: Lament of Day
Author: Keysofsnow
Media: Book
Topic: Fairy Tale
Genre: Angst / Friendship
URL: Lament of Day
Critiqued by Addicted Reader

Well, hello there.  Please, come in, join me.  For today’s snarking, I have wandered back to the “fairy tale” section.  Today’s fanfic is a very vague and poorly worded retelling of “Beauty and the Beast.”  The author starts the body of the story with the summary, so let’s just jump right in:

Lament of Day

Beauty and the Beast. Because things are less clear in the dark, and make light of it for me.

That is not a sentence.  And other than naming the fairy tale being fanfic’d here, it is pretty devoid of information.  But you can all see why I picked it to snark.

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