Title: Lament of Day
Topic: Fairy Tale
Genre: Angst / Friendship
URL: Lament of Day
Critiqued by Addicted Reader
Well, hello there. Please, come in, join me. For today’s snarking, I have wandered back to the “fairy tale” section. Today’s fanfic is a very vague and poorly worded retelling of “Beauty and the Beast.” The author starts the body of the story with the summary, so let’s just jump right in:
Lament of Day
Beauty and the Beast. Because things are less clear in the dark, and make light of it for me.
That is not a sentence. And other than naming the fairy tale being fanfic’d here, it is pretty devoid of information. But you can all see why I picked it to snark.