Title: A Jedi’s Destiny: Episode I: Rise of the Sith
Topic: Star Wars / Land Before Time
Genre: Sci Fi / Adventure
URL: A Jedi’s Destiny: Episode I: Rise of the Sith – Chapter 2
Critiqued by TacoMagic
Welcome back to the second week of the giant Star Wars / Land Before Time fic, A Jedi’s Destiny. Since the chapters start getting incredibly long at this point, I’ll be breaking them up into more manageable chunks. For reference, A Jedi’s Destiny is nearly twice as long as my last big project, untold zombie chronicels*. We’re in for a long, long-winded ride here, folks.
*untold zombie chornicels is now defunct, likely because the dinosaur sex scene is a violation of the FF.net policy which prohibits stories with explicit sex scenes to be posted on their site. Since both myself and at least one of our patrons reported the violation, I assume this is the reason it was taken down. Fear not, I copied the sequels onto my hard drive in the event that those get reported too. Thanks for the help unnamed patron (we both know who you are)!
Last time we were thrilled as a Moff came down to a planet named after himself in order to strike a deal with Sith Lord Malak, who had been cloned from a genetic makeup found in some 4000 year old ruins. Whatever data storage device they’re using, I want the patent to it. Not much else happened other than some long-winded overly elaborate descriptions of everything.