Title: Asari Healing
Author: Jedi Qui-Gon
Media: Video Game / Movie / Book
Topic: Mass Effect / Star Wars / Twilight
URL: Asari Healing – Chapter Two
Critiqued by Herr Wozzeck
Hello again, children, and welcome back to the snarking of Asari Healing. Last time, it was established that the Republic and the asari can both cross billions (possibly trillions) of light years in the course of an hour, the asari can heal people with their sexual reproductive processes, and Qui-Gon Jinn is now a zombie that can talk. By this point, we have also established that this author is someone who can’t be bothered to explain what the hell is going on and how approximately half the fic is possible.
Nope, this one just jumps right into the action.
This, by the way, is exactly what we’ll be doing now. So let’s dig right into chapter two of this insanity fest.