234: Control – Chapter Fifteen, Part One

Title: Control
Author: Jckash03 (Now permanently referred to as Jackass)
Media: Television / Movie
Topic: Dragon Ball Z
Genre: Suspense / Romance
URL: Control – Chapter Fifteen
Critiqued by Lyle
Submitted by Blessed8be

Hello, everyone!  A few observant readers may have noticed that it’s Saturday, not Monday.  FPM and I are switching update days due to our personal schedules conflicting with the update deadlines.  Hopefully this hasn’t caused any undue confusion.

With that said, welcome back to “Control,” a DBZ fic that begs the question:

Whiskey. Tango. Foxtrot?

Things have gone from mildly intolerable to downright freakish in the last fourteen chapters.  There’s some sort of bizarre ‘ho vibe floating around Bra that makes everyone desperately want to bone her, even though she’s only a squicky thirteen years old.

Last we gathered, Gohan ran away from home after throwing a tantrum.  We discovered that Gohan equates dirty thoughts with cheating on your spouse, Goku apparently has been having naughty ideas regarding Bra, and Vegeta is still a douche bag, but he’s a douche bag that loves his very dysfunctional family.  The last thing we saw was that Bra is going to be home schooled, a move that is probably a much better idea than allowing her out in public.  Her teacher is an android known as 17, the brother of 18 (Marron’s mother).  He asks her to call him “Authority” in Japanese, because Jackass does not understand Japanese.

I’m going to do my best to behave myself today, too.  *sets Harry on the shelf*  For science!

Let’s get to it!  We’re in for a long haul today.

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