231: call of duty:the untold zombie chronicels – Chapter Nine

Title: call of duty:the untold zombie chronicels
Author: insane doctor and judgmentdragon25
Media: Video Game/Movie
Topic: Call of Duty/Land Before Time Cross-Over
Genre: None Listed
URL: call of duty:the untold zombie chronicels – Chapter Nine
Critiqued by TacoMagic

It’s Wednesday, so that means I get to subject you to more of this poo-covered train-wreck of a fic.

A quick recap from last time: Team Stu did a lot of gun-play and then ran into Littlefoot’s father, Bron.  They “carefully” avoided any conflict with Bron by dodging his questions about his parents.  And Bron, being a gentleman and a dinosaur, didn’t press the issue.  They all piled into a cave and went to sleep… without setting up any kind of sentries or night watch.  Good job, Team Stu.

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